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20th Jan 2017, 9:00 PM in Chapter 1
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Rocktopus 20th Jan 2017, 9:00 PM edit delete
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kyrtuck 23rd Jan 2017, 4:47 PM edit delete reply
kyrtuck
The order of the speech bubbles was a little bit confusing on that third panel.
Rocktopus 23rd Jan 2017, 9:48 PM edit delete reply
Rocktopus
Yeah, I tried to rearrange it, but I couldn't figure out how to without having to redraw the panel. Lesson learned.
AlpineBob 30th Jul 2018, 7:22 AM edit delete reply
kyrtuck is right. But if the speech baloons are separate from the art, it should be a fairly simple fix.
I'd start in panel three by centering the first bubble from the guard, and have the tail come to the next bubble in panel four. The final bubble should be to the right of the previous one, so give it a separate tail and put it on top of the onlooker's faces there. Or, if you want to preserve the faces, move it down over their torsos.
Just food for thought...
Cuddlefish 1st Feb 2018, 5:45 AM edit delete reply
Finally, someone drawing a fantasy comic who knows which arm to put the heavy armor on!
Bizkit 11th Aug 2018, 10:32 PM edit delete reply
Well, unless you've changed it already, I didn't find the speech bubbles confusing. You read from top to bottom, then left to right, not the other way around.