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6th Feb 2017, 4:12 PM in Chapter 1
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John190 7th Feb 2017, 3:54 PM edit delete reply
OH! Ouch.
kyrtuck 7th Feb 2017, 8:19 PM edit delete reply
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She's gonna be sad
Lilbluebox 9th Feb 2017, 3:04 PM edit delete reply
Oh, dear. Poor Colleen. It's always tough to learn your friends aren't really your friends, doubly so when they pull crap like this. They didn't have the decency to replace her before they made the trip, so now she's made this journey for nothing. Jerks.

Granted, my opinion might be revised by the upcoming pages, but it's pretty hard to mistake "Sorry, thanks, but no thanks, we don't want you, we found someone else, go away now please," as anything remotely positive.

But on the other hand, if they weren't jerks, we wouldn't have a plot!

I really do love the story you're crafting here; the prologue was engaging, which I find is relatively rare, and it did a wonderful job of setting things up. The dashes of humor so well-written into the story make me very happy. The entire tale is setting itself up to be a very fun, very kooky kind of adventure, with enough seriousness to show that it does take itself seriously. A difficult balance, but a worthwhile one. Colleen is a treasure and I adore her. She's such an entertaining and relatable protagonist and I can't wait to see where her journey takes her.

Plus, she's just so gosh darn cute. I just wanna pinch her little cheeks. :]

And your art. Your art is just fantastic; I love your character designs, your backgrounds - there was this one massive overhead view a while back that was just so magnificently done I stared at it for a good ten minutes, picking out all the details. Very, very good work!

The story overall feels a lot like a fun D&D campaign. I look forward to seeing where it goes!
Rocktopus 9th Feb 2017, 4:37 PM edit delete reply
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Wow! Thank you for the kind words. I'm glad to hear how much you're enjoying my comic!

A large amount of design and inspiration was taken from my friends and my D&D games; so the influence of it is probably pretty clear :)

I actually have the whole story written already, and the first chapter and half of the second is already drawn. So I can assure you, it's only going to get better from here.
Unseen Omen 30th Aug 2017, 8:21 AM edit delete reply
Oooooh my god! That's brutal :'( gee! Poor Colleen! After all the trouble!